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Item: Dropped, writing isn't just for me
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AverageArtEnjoyerLv39mthAverageArtEnjoyer

writing bad the character dialogue feels forced and choppy/robotic, the fights are boring, the story is mid ⭐⭐

Dropped, writing isn't just for me

DespairHope

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DespairHope作者DespairHope

Yeah, I Know, that's my problem, I really couldn't create emotions and so I try to create a Psychopath that craves pleasure due to it being the first thing he feels but I still couldn't quite create atmosphere and emotions for other characters. I'm someone with a lot of ideas but doesn't have the talent and the drive to create that said Idea.

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AverageArtEnjoyerLv3AverageArtEnjoyer

I can understand that I have the same problem

DespairHope:Yeah, I Know, that's my problem, I really couldn't create emotions and so I try to create a Psychopath that craves pleasure due to it being the first thing he feels but I still couldn't quite create atmosphere and emotions for other characters. I'm someone with a lot of ideas but doesn't have the talent and the drive to create that said Idea.
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