so far story is great but I hope u make mc more confident as he has will of pride and make him brave enough to be outgoing enough and not worry about plot shield for protagonist and other stereotypes
MS_Reddy
5の人に「いいね!」しました
Thanks for the review.
How is the grammar?
great 👍👍
machadogbc:How is the grammar?
HappyKing:great 👍👍