story development, world background, and characters are good but you need to work grammar mistakes, spellings. Other than that this story better than many story. Keep giving more chapters author. Don’t drop this story. I would also recommend others reading my review to give this webnovel a try. You would not be disappointed.
Nemesis_Writer
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!