The wording is acceptable, but I suspect it's a copy and paste so far. I'm not sure if the plot will continue to be identical to that of the series, merely with the addition of a character, or if new elements will be introduced in the story's development. This comment was written up to chapter 8; I will change my rating if there are improvements.
Kxngkarma17
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!