Review Detail of Thalia_Ilace in Chaos Prophet

I read Chapter 1 & 2 for reference~ First things first, I will say that there really weren't any grammatical errors that I found, and there was only one word usage issue, possibly a second although that one I'm not 100% on, that I found, which is pretty impressive and I'd like to say good job. I think the female in the first chapter was described very well and I think you did a really great job with her descriptions, however I think you dropped the ball on doing that for the main character, there was no descriptions for him. Which was disappointing because I think that you are capable of doing a good job with that if you had described him. I think there could've been more world description, you did really well in describing the lab, but outside of that there wasn't much. The AI world, while you described so much of what was happening, I wish you had described more of what this world looked like. All in all, I think the plot is good and so far seems well done. I think that this will appeal to a lot of people and I see it doing well. Overall, good job and good work!