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Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv41yrDissapointed_One

I have no words. Oh wait, found them. So MC doesn't exist, story doesn't exist as well, and author repeats himself multiple gimes. Writing itself is weird and creepy, "dialogues" are not a thing, everything is presented in facts instead. Also author seems to be Russian, and as a Russian man myself, i do not recommend to read this poor attempt at writing.

Old Man's MetaUniverse Café

RockSaur

3の人に「いいね!」しました

いいね

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RockSaur
RockSaur作者RockSaur

You're right, it's terrible. Thanks to you, I saw my problems, now I can improve myself. And dialogues, you're goddamn right (again)

LittleLemur
LittleLemurLv13LittleLemur

you saved other's time, thank you