Review Detail of Time_Alter in Kyuubi in Dxd

Item: Kyuubi in Dxd
Rating: 3.6

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Time_AlterLv41yrTime_Alter

It a good idea for a story but there are two things that that really bother me half of some the chapter are just stats ;/ i hate when fanfic do this gives a false sense that you are getting a long chapter but half that is just a list of numbers. Last point mc name Naruto :| is that the best you can come up with

Kyuubi in Dxd

Anotherhumanperson

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Abhiz_Maha_3129Lv4Abhiz_Maha_3129

I would like to suggest: DAICHI as in DAI meaning great and ICHI as in one. Great one! Also for the last name some thing like Kyuzumaki. Which according to goolge means; nine picture spiral. Daichi Kyuzumaki!

1yr

Abhiz_Maha_3129Lv4Abhiz_Maha_3129

Also Daichi means earth. So Earth Nine-spiral

1yr

yoshikage_kira9Lv12yoshikage_kira9

I think it would've been dope if he was named Kurama. It's just so much better.

1yr