don't know about the rest, but making the name of the main character of a fanfic the same as the preestablished character in the stories is just not good. I got super confused when knowing that the mc name is jasmine, and this is atg ... where there's should be another jasmine and a pivotal character in the story. and yeah, the mc is a male, confused ... how in the world a man has jasmine as his name? and there's also quite confusing things with the dialogue and the conversation with the system. I don't know, maybe I'm too lazy to try make any sense of it but it's just feel detached. I don't feel any of his interaction is organic.
DreuxX
8の人に「いいね!」しました
いいねDreuxX:Later, the story makes more sense because it has that name. PS: Remember, the female character mentioned doesn't use her real name.