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It’s a pretty decent story with a lot of potential but my main problem with it is that Auhtor does not go into detail about a lot of things like *spoiler coming* He starts a YouTube channel and in what is like 1 chapter he gets 172k subscribers but Auhtor does not tell use how he gets them, what type of channel is his, what videos does he make or when he’s at school he doesn’t actually talk about the school day like I know he’s a loner but you could at least stand out once or twice, maybe describe some main characters like Flash, Peter, Ned, mj or the rest. That’s pretty much it though, for how little chapter are up, Author does a good job of establishing MCs character slightly (Sorry for the rant)
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HighTierHuman
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I know but in your story the MC is not interacting with anyone, there’s no action romance drama or anything so it may get a little bland if you’re just explaining it as ‘oh my YouTube channel which you know nothing about readers has gotten pretty big,’ Also I think a lot of people would like to at least get information on his channel you know until he starts making an impact in Marvel
HighTierHuman:I didn't do any of that cus that isn't the point of this fanfic, I dont want to rant about it when it really isn't important, I just mentioned it so people dont come out of nowhere and ask where all his money came from. If this was a entertainment fanfic I would of done all that but it aint.
Yeah I get your point, But the mc isn't focusing on love and stuff like that for now, he is gathering the means for power, while trying to make money, he will eventually get into the fighting and power usage, which is gonna happen in the next 2 chapters or so, I will try to get more stuff like that in tho. Thanks for the review
Honoured_Writer:I know but in your story the MC is not interacting with anyone, there’s no action romance drama or anything so it may get a little bland if you’re just explaining it as ‘oh my YouTube channel which you know nothing about readers has gotten pretty big,’ Also I think a lot of people would like to at least get information on his channel you know until he starts making an impact in Marvel