Review Detail of Mastersun in Forging an Empire with technical knowledge : oliver path to prosperity

its a imaginary tale.. i am just trying to creat parallel timeline but also with some differences

With all due respect, you already have an original work coming out, not even an alternative story on the world of game of Thrones, since only the name Valyria connects your work with this universe, and the remaining 98% of your own fiction from these remaining 2% that are associated with the world of game of Thrones is too much to put in the game of Thrones tags.