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Lv101yr

I must mention that I'm posting this review as a ml reader, so keep that in mind. Lets talk about the world first, everything was explained pretty well, the different realms, one for humans, the other for the angels, the creator and all other higher beings. The village is great too, it felt real, but all of this isn't the focus of this story atleast so far, the focus is the characters, and since so far it appeared to be a slice of life, romance type of novel. Writing quality, great, nothing to complain about, sentence structure and everything in the writing regard is much better now after the rewrite. Now, lets talk about the main thing about the novel, the dynamic between the FL and her angel stalker the ML, he is interested in her and is stalking her everyday, while she struggles to go through life, with that brat peter chasing after her, in the rewrite it makes me hate him much more, which I like, now for the other characters, all of them are well written, and their interactions so far are good too, as well as their designs. So the Plot, the plot is lacking in excitement in the beginning, but I guess that is how it is with a slice of life kind of novels, I'm judging this on only the 13 chaps btw, I know that in the future a lot of big stuff are going to happen but yeah, so we have the ticking time bomb being peter, and her marriage, and the possibility of the Mc's getting together, that is what drives the story forward, although I said it's lacking in excitement but it's great, after all the FL is really likeable so I easily began rooting for her, TLDR: Good romance focused novel, go read it.

SINS OF THE SERAPHIM

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