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First of all the story is interesting though I occasionally read romance genere. But this book is really awesome. But I wanna suggest some things to writer. Cover and Syonpsis try to add a splendid cover and a synopsis those two would definitely benefit you. Other thing is there were no comma or indications between dialogues it seem like it goes on with the narration or might get mistaken with someone else's dialogue so make sure to use comma between dialogues so it will look more organised and won't get mixed with narration. Apart from this the writing and creation is enjoyable really good one keep writing Author.

Doomed without you

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