Review Detail of EphemeralKaos in Fate: the son of the mage killer (Shiro x saber)

Oh I am sorry for that I suggest you hear the story then it is better that way and you can understand it I will fix the ch that for telling me this

I hope your still reading I gess hearing this story and I hope you like it I make sure to fix the previous ch

I mean, I can try it again, but I can’t guarantee that I will continue after that getting past the grammar was hard enough, but the small glimpse of personality that I saw from some characters was not appealing at all.

I see I understand it is your choice that if you don't want to read this story anymore

at first I shrugged it off mc was 5 would make sense for improper speech but on CHP 3 when a 30~ year old professional assassin cant say mystic? and says Mistake yeah.. spelling is bad Grammar is Bad Idea is decent? maybe? Flow is non existent it's an attempt at least now will you try to improve or will you give up (like I did I realized writing wasn't my calling)

in all honesty I have improved a lot, from will what ever this was, no really what was I trying to write