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MrSheta
MrShetaLv101yrMrSheta

Good ff for the moment, in Finn's first fight I'm left with a bit of disagreement regarding his abilities, but it's okay... But the thing about Jake's body is bothering me, I hope to continue reading and see how he convinces us author of his path and changes that he will produce.

THE ADVENTURE CONTINUES IN DANMACHI

Nox_kun

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Nox_kun作者Nox_kun

I wasn't really sure what ability to give finn , cause I wanted the power to be similar to the show so I just stuck with that.

Nox_kun
Nox_kun作者Nox_kun

plus the changes in James body aren't bad ones , it's more of a matter of his control over it for now

Nox_kun:I wasn't really sure what ability to give finn , cause I wanted the power to be similar to the show so I just stuck with that.