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First of all a major thing you would have to slug through is the first few chapters which is filled with infodumps, and although I say that, those infodumps explain a very interesting world, a world of cultivation, sci-fi and different races fighting against a never ending wave of monsters called the devourers. Writing quality is excellent, although there exist some huge walls of texts but the writing itself is very good, way better than what you see on this site, I don't think I even saw one noticable mistake in grammer. The author updates daily, with many chapters sometimes at a day, so five stars there. Story development, I would go for three stars as the pacing of the story is a little off, as its constantly bombarded by a lot of info dumping causing the story to not flow as much as it possibly could, its 40 chapters in and we barely know anything about the mc, he is like a blank slate so far, we understand bits and pieces of his personality but nothing else, as for his ultimate goal, it came off as rushed with no buildup. Character design is great, very much so, most of the characters introduced are likable, except some that are inherently annoying, on purpose mind you, while some are straight badass, specially that Archon, and the MC's father, so yeah good stuff all around, nothing more to say here. Here comes the best part about this novel, the world background, I love it, although slightly generic with the other human like races, being elves and dwarves, the others are more intriguing, but I wont spoil that for you, now comes the big bad, the main enemies are special, I like the way they were designed and their capabilities, with them causing the hollow planets, all of it, five stars, the world also has sci-fi elements as its some time in the future, space travel, visiting different planets, and the current event with the mc with him going to the FORGE, good stuff, most likely by the time you read this review the author would have already fixed the infodump situation. TLDR, Good novel, go read it.

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