Review Detail of Pragmatico in Crazy Orc

Item: Crazy Orc
Rating: 3

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PragmaticoLv151yrPragmatico

Read what has been released so far (chapter 42) as a reference point. The character development is good and not only for the MC but the other orcs around him as well. World building is very slow at the moment but the story is slow paced as a whole for now. MC has learned a lot but as far as learning to fight and fighting itself not much here yet. Grammar needs a lot of work before charging for chapters though. Hope it gets edited and improves over time

Crazy Orc

zoroonfire

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zoroonfire作者zoroonfire

Thanks for reading. This is my first novel, and English isn't my primary language. I'll improve the grammar. I love reading novels, but writing one is far more complicated than I believed.

1yr

Louis_ZimmerLv15Louis_Zimmer

keep going your doing great For your First time

zoroonfire:Thanks for reading. This is my first novel, and English isn't my primary language. I'll improve the grammar. I love reading novels, but writing one is far more complicated than I believed.

1yr