Review Detail of Allen_Vinkaldr in The Greatest Disciple of the Evil Sect

Author cheers to a cruel comment. In the best way possible the writing of this novel is horrid and killed my hopes for this novel. From what I read the plot, how the story was progressing and the tags on the novel were all something I liked but the way it was displayed and typed ruined everything the sentences, just about every single one was flawed the way the auther typed a fight focused way to much on trying to display the sounds made it seem like the fighters were trying to have a beat box challenge instead and the first three sections were the worst. They could've been displayed so much better with some more work put into this novel I would've loved reading but hopes are meant to die. Author for future notes please try think more how to display the surroundings of the fight as it goes on to give the readers a better picture. A novel is similar to a movie I doubt many people that loved to watch their favorite TV show would like all except the characters to be completely black and sound bubbles to block the characters fighting whenever something happens it would be an annoyance, however the fighting is notmy point it was just one of the annoyancees I left with. the main point is to use more descriptive sentences to get your points across if that had happened even a little more in the story I would've loved to read this more however the novel reached the unbearable threshold. In future hope you improve on this. (Hope you don't let this hope die) Miracle you got so many five stars don't even know how you got those or maybie I am strange whatever though. Ruthless awser - Your writing is garbage and needs major improvement. Absolutely insufferable.