if you guy have any problem don't mind share to me but please keep civilize and not being toxic thx.
weeb_xoai
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いいねah i aware of that also am bad at naming so I will try to change it also about grammar of early chapter well i will do rewrite but not now due to am too busy but thx
Finnish_man:I have not read it cus the names so wierd u should come up with a new name and the synopsis has few mistakes that are very easy to spot i can say i am not good at englhis its my second launage and i am still able to spot them no hat for u u can do what ever u want I DO NOT MEAN TO OFFEND
I mostly dont like mc name for few reasons it dosent give mc any personality or anything and i dont know what Y/N means and i dont allways have time to read so i use text to speach and Y/N sound so goofy of course u dont need to change it if u dont want i am not saying what u have to do i jus wanna say some of my opinions
weeb_xoai:ah i aware of that also am bad at naming so I will try to change it also about grammar of early chapter well i will do rewrite but not now due to am too busy but thx
Finnish_man:I mostly dont like mc name for few reasons it dosent give mc any personality or anything and i dont know what Y/N means and i dont allways have time to read so i use text to speach and Y/N sound so goofy of course u dont need to change it if u dont want i am not saying what u have to do i jus wanna say some of my opinions