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Review Detail of PleaseTouchGrass in Superhuman Battlefield

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PleaseTouchGrass
PleaseTouchGrassLv131yrPleaseTouchGrass

Not an original story by any means, takes some interesting pieces of common Korean dungeon divers (like the OP MC) and adds in esports elements while subtly foreshadowing a possible cataclysmic event. The story cannot be said to be a masterpiece, but the story itself is interesting, the main issue is that it is almost incoherent. It was likely translated with MTL which switches pronouns and the subject of the sentence constantly leaving the reader questioning which character is doing which action constantly. There are good MTL translations out there, but not this one.

Superhuman Battlefield

ellio_

Liked it!

いいね

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ellio_
ellio_作者ellio_

sorry for the translation, but thanks for reading and giving a review.. i really appreciate it

PleaseTouchGrass
PleaseTouchGrassLv13PleaseTouchGrass

The manga adaption is great, I like the story, the translation was my only issue :)

ellio_:sorry for the translation, but thanks for reading and giving a review.. i really appreciate it