Review Detail of Sapphire_Ace in Cultivation God -My Harem

To be honest this is pretty good so far. It's can be pretty funny, but it's a tinge bit difficult to read in parts. The development of the main character could be better and the writing fluidity and grammar can be improved just by simple editing. I do enjoy the thought put into the magic system, and the feel of an ero game is kind of there but it kind of incorporates real consequences vs someone just behind a screen able to redo it.