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Quite tempting and charming 😊 the quality of your writing is very good and beautiful, it is very moody to make readers imagine it. But there are some shortcomings, especially in the separation of explanatory text and dialogue text. But for all the story is already goodgood

SCARLET LOCKWOOD "Yes he wears the trousers but I control the zipper"

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Thanks for your opinion will improve🙏