Review Detail of Mesarik in Beauty of Magic

As an author of this mess, I know that I’m giving it my all. But my inexperience can be clearly seen in this story, not to mention that my knowledge of the English language is also lacking. The biggest problem I have is the stability of uploading, its really stressful to follow the self set boundaries that I placed upon myself. So I'm giving myself a 3,6. Happy reading :D