I really like pokemon, so its nice to read a story that goes in this background. It has only one chapter, then I cannot dive deep with my review, however the only thing breaking here is the writing quality. I recommend you to use Grammarly and Wordtune to review your chapter before posting here, it will highly improve it. All in all, keep up the good work :)
Ghostuchichq
2の人に「いいね!」しました
いいね