Review Detail of monokuma_ball in The power that made me

Sorry if this offends the writer but I‘m just being an honest critic doing a brief review. This story is extremely mediocre with a lack of any good grammar or vocabulary. There is nothing this novel does which differentiates itself meaningfully from all the other “weak protagonist becomes the strongest”narratives. With the poor execution of this story currently I can’t recommend this to any of my friends unfortunately and don’t picture this novel lasting for more than 6 months with a strong viewer base. I hope the first few chapters released are just building up and the quality of the story and writing vastly improves because right now it is shaping up to be remarkably forgettable. 3.4/10

Okay, didn't see this comment. So I'm sorry for the late reply. English isn't my first language but I'm working on improving myself. But I am still glad despite you not liking it that you gave it a try. And I do hope that I last for 6 months.

Ur a robot, nothing more. Also he must have been somewhat right the novel is now completed at 24 chapters which I’m assuming the author gave up on it.