Review Detail of themusicaddict in Graveyard Residents

I love it, the concept is fresh, it's engaging, and the story feels well written, I do however have a problem with how you sometimes word stuff, it is hard to explain, but it's something you will understand once you read a few good books, if classics like homer's odyssey, or Julius Ceaser don't interest you, id recommend tyranny of steel or supremacy games if you haven't read them. try analyzing how they write it will bump your work up to a 5 super quick in my books.