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This has a nice idea to be developed! It gives you the vibe of: "I know that you did in the last summer". Few chapters, so I don't have much else to comment about. Things to improve: Grammar: It has grammatical issues that sometimes break the flow and readability. Suggestion: Listen up to channels like 'Southern Cannibal' and 'Let's Read', they have some amazing school stories. It will give you inspirations to develop the plot. Keep the good work :)