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Item: YOU GOT THE WRONG PERSON FOR A PROTAGONIST
Rating: 4.4

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joyboy69Lv41yrjoyboy69

the story is good so far however Arthur you only use [] and it's confusing for me and possibly other readers to know whether the person is thinking or talking so I suggest something like this( " --> for talking)(' --> for thinking)([] --> for system) I think it will help a lot with the story

YOU GOT THE WRONG PERSON FOR A PROTAGONIST

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

Liked it!

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SCARLETToFBoCOTHER作者SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

i did change the marking after the early chapter will need to wait before I changedthem too it's a work on hold for later date

1yr

Infinite_Shadow_57Lv14Infinite_Shadow_57

Oh, so it's on hiatus

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER:i did change the marking after the early chapter will need to wait before I changedthem too it's a work on hold for later date

1yr