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So far so good as you mentioned it'd be a fun project. But need to work on punctuation and create more conversation between characters to not feel like two dimensional. especially when colt interacted with Clara it was so fast and it'd not look good in the long run. Waiting for more..

One Day I Woke Up With an Achievment System

Clutch_Russ

Liked it!

いいね
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返事はありません。最初になろう!