for a chinese to english translation its pretty good (for a edited MTL, its still pretty bad overall). my problems with the novel come from the story development.. once again, aizen is a prominent figure, its honestly too boring. basically every bleach fic is just the mc either following or stressing about aizen nonstop. i kinda wish someone would write an AU without aizen and write some OCs or something, maybe make the hollows much more powerful in an AU so that the enemy dosent need to be fking aizen..
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