Great start. Unique power set of MC. Pacing of story is good. Can improve the dialogues in story. Also mc is commoner so initial interaction with nobles should be more subdued for mc, till he achieves power and status. Overall enjoyed the first 8 chaps. Please don't drop.
elfon
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!