Review Detail of HotPotatoBW in Celestial Bloodline

**LIGHT SPOILER** In the first chapter (literally ch 1), Kyle was described as a lazy person who wanted to live a leisurely life, then in ch 2 he suddenly had a thought of retaliation against his brother. As a lazy person myself, I'd say this doesn't make sense. If you're lazy and you have little banter with your siblings you'd rather shrug it off because YOU'RE LAZY. So being lazy and then wanting to get back to his brother is like a shift in his personality. After reading up to ch 7 or 8 (I forgot), I noticed that the author was trying to make a situation similar to TNE where the MC got lucky while he is unaware of what is happening around him. (Originality: ❌) The novel's pace is TOO SLOW. 20 chapters and nothing really happen. Not even relationship building. He already knows his family is weak, so why not build connections? Being weak is acceptable, he's still young but stupidity is... Ughhh I can't. His meeting with Nine is forced; The author doesn't know how to make friends. The author is trying to make him (Kyle) someone who doesn't talk and will act cool later on by showing off that he's good/better at something which is NOT cool. (Not happening yet but I know it will. Trust me, I know this cliche plot lol) The sword art Kyle learned is a knock off of Ren's sword art (TAPoV). Again, no originality. Writing Quality 2/5 Story Development: 3/5 Character Design: 3/5 Updating stab: 5/5? World Background: 3/5. I dropped the novel at ch 41. If you're going to read this, I suggest reading TNE then TAPoV instead. Since I dropped the novel before reaching at least 100 ch I'll at least give this 3.2 stars, who knows this might become good in the mid/end of the novel but too many word count wasted on irrelevant descriptions in the early chapters so I dropped. I hope this doesn't end up being a knock off version of good novels. Still, good luck author-san.