For this novel, I enjoyed my time reading it. In my opinion, the basic description, story, and pacing are there. Although, they could be improved. Not many chapters out yet, but I hope that the author shows more about the MC's personality and kindness. I wish you luck in writing your novel!
Kita8944
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!