i am currently in the 21st chapter and i think its doing great but my only issue is him desperately clinging to humanity like its not something disposable
Sire_K
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I must say you are the best when it comes to criticism. Your criticism has helped me improve a lot, Thank you.
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Sire_K:I must say you are the best when it comes to criticism. Your criticism has helped me improve a lot, Thank you.
is it?
The truth is, This was a review before the rewrite but it's the truth which I will address in the future.
Mobius_5trip:is it?