Review Detail of daylightmoon123445 in Moondust: the moment of tangency

Hey, shameless author review here! But you know what they say, you are your first biggest fan :) So, I'll be honest here, I don't know how this story will turn out. This was a thriller, but the thriller didn't speak to me, so I just changed it to something overnight(because I can, lol). Regarding the writing quality and story development, as far as I can say, it's nice and it's readable so it's of good quality. My favorite part of the story is the characters, especially the side ones. I enjoy writing them so much and I hope you like them as well!! I've never been good in the stability of updates, but let me try and stay consistent this time(I've been stockpiling the chapters like huntsmen do for winter). The world background is well...it's not pretty wide since it's just a small town, but hey, you never know(hint, hint). Thanks for reading my story, let me know some tips and tops, and please don't leave anything mean, I would gladly learn from my mistakes but not at the cost of my feelings.