Review Detail of Shaine_chan in Time For Vengeance

Hi, I've read the first few chapters of the stories, and here's my review. First of all, the writing quality needs to be improved from the grammar, and proper usage of punctuation marks. I've seen typos that need to be edited. The character design and story development are good so far as well as the world background. Lastly, it would nice if the chapters are longer. Overall, the story has great potential. Just needs a little improvement. Good job author