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Shaine_chan
Shaine_chanLv21yrShaine_chan

Hi, I've read the first few chapters of the stories, and here's my review. First of all, the writing quality needs to be improved from the grammar, and proper usage of punctuation marks. I've seen typos that need to be edited. The character design and story development are good so far as well as the world background. Lastly, it would nice if the chapters are longer. Overall, the story has great potential. Just needs a little improvement. Good job author

Time For Vengeance

Patience_Agboola

2の人に「いいね!」しました

いいね

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Patience_Agboola作者Patience_Agboola

okay