Review Detail of Dontlookdown in The Unbeatable Kingdom

The premise is great. I have a soft spot for OP kingdom stories thanks to overlord. The writing quality is a slight issue with the first few chapters, but I could see it improving as I read farther in. As for the characters, I found Rico to be my favorite. Pacing was a problem, but again, improves as the story goes further along. I think with some editing-- mixed with the gradual improvement of the writing quality --this can go from a good novel to a great one.