i have read upto chapter 22 so maybe I'm qualified to review this gotta say this fanfic of danmachi is pretty amazing..i like the char and it's battles i hope there's some more conversations it has alot of potential already and author can make more events as the timeline is before canon i.e 2 years so we will get more unpredictable and unexpected things to see.

Best Danmachi fan-fic I've read so far. It has good character development and it puts time into developing and understanding the current Bell Cranel. It has a slow start, but it is necessary to understand Bell and it follows the kind of story it wants to transmit without deviating like others fan-fics do. I'm enjoying it a lot and would've wish i had started it much later so that I don't need to suffer waiting for more chapters. Keep it up author, in my opinion your doing a great job writing your story. I hope it stays that way and goodluck with future chapters. (If possible I would like to know approximately how long [chapters] do you expect this novel to be if it gets to finish)

this ff would have been good if not for Freya as a love interest. I don't get why people love Freya so much no matter how good she might be she is a sl ut with a body count more than millions. Sometimes even meeting your girlfriend's ex-boyfriends things get awkward but here you want to be a relationship with Freya who has slept with more than half of orario and almost all of the male gods. I also don't get her concept of love if your soul is pure then she loves you if not you're nothing and this doesn't depend on your personality but rather in your talent so I can guess from here that is a mindset of common gold diggers. Are you completely sure in her mind you're not just one of the millions of men she slept with just more talent??? Habits\Addiction don't die easily especially not for someone who is practicing it for millions of years and it won't miraculously change in a single day after meeting you.

This MC sucks. He has some cool abilities but the character sucks. Its pretty boring to read and way too trope heavy. The author even went with the dense protagonist cliche.

I assumed since this was a Bell insert with a cheat from a different world, The book wouldn't be anything special. I was wrong. This is competing for the best Danmachi fanfic I've ever read, comparative to Elementalist. if it continues at the same level and finishes off strong, it will most certainly take that spot for me. After getting over what many would consider an overly emotional beginning that I ended up surprisingly being fond of, the story hits no snags from there. Despite going a little off the beaten path, there isn't a single time where I would consider any chapter to be part of a filler. TLDR, please don't drop...

Probably my favourite danmachi fic by far, it has everything from comedy to action to epicness(?) i actually find myself anticipating every next chapter. so far 10/10

Chapter (Raid under Moonlight) 15 as of writing this review. Amazing work. The haters say it's too much drama or things like that because they are used to garbage writing that is abundant on webnovel. Okay, maybe the part where Zeus and Bell talk about Bell killing "Bell" for taking over "Bell's" body was too much for some of you but please continue reading. It's all part of the process.

I am the bone of my sword Steel is my body and fire is my blood I have created over a thousand blades Unknown to death nor known to life Have withstood pain to create many weapons Yet this hands will never hold anyting So as i Pray UNLIMITED BLADE WORKS!!

this story is great each chapter ends with me wanting more and I have to put this here but I think if there was like a doctor who (when a good man goes to war) Moment where he collects all his favors for one big fight (like against dionysius) that would be awesome .