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Item: Riot academia
Rating: 5

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AnimeTagzLv49mthAnimeTagz

The story itself is interesting and the plot is great but i find myself getting put off by writing style. Maybe that's just not my preference but it almost seemed as though i was reading a diary instead of a novel. Lol, not that I'm any better tbh. Keep up the good work and continue to improve.

Riot academia

UniqueKarma

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Not completely... This is only my opinion but I feel you just need to occasionally move away from a characters's perspective and describe the situation around them to make not feel like a collection of perspectives on a dairy

UniqueKarma:Thank you for the review, and do i need to change my writing style

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UniqueKarma作者UniqueKarma

Thank you for the review, and do i need to change my writing style

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UniqueKarma作者UniqueKarma

ok that sounds more better, Thank you, i will try that out on my next chapter.

AnimeTagz:Not completely... This is only my opinion but I feel you just need to occasionally move away from a characters's perspective and describe the situation around them to make not feel like a collection of perspectives on a dairy

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UniqueKarma作者UniqueKarma

I have taken care of the writing problems and spacing please take your time to go through it again for any more problem. And thank you again for your time.

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