It’s a great story, also pretty funny if you can understand it, but you need to work on the grammar otherwise your good
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いいねI really don’t know if it’s copied or not just think that the story could be written better if the grammer was good and if they used the orginals name of the characters
Knived:Did they even work on this or is this just a copy paste of a bad mtl? Cuz even the names are wrong what else is?