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Review Detail of QueenFrieza in Brother's Strength

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I'm one of those people who don't like giving 5/5 stars because I think everyone can improve on their writing abilities, but the errors I experienced don't take away from the story whatsoever that's why I think it deserves all the stars. It's such a beautifully paced story and I think every detail given is vital to how the events pan out. I saw comments saying they needed explanations immediately, but I completely disagree. Learning about the world created slowly as the story progresses is the way to go and the author does it well. There are so many things to learn about and I don't want it easy or all at once. There's a beautiful balance between dialogue and descriptive paragraphs that really helps with the immersion of the story and I found the chapters to go by really quickly for me. My favorite parts are the accurate descriptions of the harshness and beauty of the ocean. I also found the familial relationships in the story to be so endearing. The feelings their interactions give are so real. I think anyone can relate to them because they show the good and the bad. I can see myself becoming easily attached to the characters. Great job with this one!

Brother's Strength

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thank you, makes me smile to know I did a good job