Good for an overall start. Hope their is a bit of action and all. I just hope he wont add Rias and co. to his harem she's too overrated imo.

So far this is probably the author best work despite it only have like 4 chapters when I posted this, The MC is interesting as a character and a person, Amelia also is really well written character despite the fact she mostly appear in a flashback as a kid. I rarely vote or comment on other people story but if it for my dear Othi then I will do it UmU

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Well I decided to check your DxD fanfic and I have to say that this is probably the Author best work. I can say he is master at doing a flashback and making a sad backstory - For now the story feel a bit generic but the Issei's revelation in chapter 8 kinda caught me off guard.

This story is a masterpiece and there is still a long way to go until it ends XD...................................................................