Review Detail of Intreo in David's Generation: Void Era ALL SEASONS

Good day to all my followers, right now, I'm having a better inspiration to write this story. I see that the last week's reader views are now 100k. Give me more motivations. I wish that you will continue to support me and give me motivations like reviewing my story. I wish that you will correct my wrong sentences, grammars and even events. Questions me if you want to. It will help me more to see my mistakes. Please let me know. Also, can you put it in review, so that, i know what is your recent issues through reading my story. Thanks for reader views and Advanced Sorry for mistakes in my story. Please let me know.