it is a good story however, you have to correct your paragraphs though. It is still a good story if I read it with common sense I think? Still, update it and make sure to have twist stories. Btw.. I'm newbie here... I dunno how to level up.. I think that my first story to read, I will stick to you..
Intreo
Liked it!
いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!