Well, your story can become good or better if it was adopted in anime. Also, I am looking for reincarnation, isekai, fantasy and adventurous genres. I also want to look forward on your story especially the girl that the main character liked. Also, the MC and the girl is a little bit kind of ecchi in my imagination that a 12-year-old children accidentally tripped and drop and after that, you can expect it, however, some of it is twistable like IDK if it is his mother or adopted mother which is a Queen of the Kingdom, right? Her reaction is excellent like the anime tv series' mother's funny reaction to their children with their wrong ideas. That's one of the most funny moments I ever watched or even read. However, it is not complete. I can change my mind through your novel. Either positive or negative ratings, you should have to give your best. Also, you can watch anime or read manga and light novels about the reincarnation or isekai and see what they did. Although, you don't have to copy it only, copy their ideas and enhance it. Again, I'm looking forward at your story.
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