It's a good novel but a slight grammatical errors here and there. when I started writing my book, a kind author adviced me about too much questions and answers, which might be a slight problem. apart from that, it's a great story all together. research more, I still do more research myself. Writing is a process... so we shouldn't give up despite all criticisms.I am rooting for you! ð
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