Review Detail of renardine in Fight like a king

This is a very promising start (ending) to your story! I really enjoyed learning about the small kingdom and the people in it, from John scolding his people (but not with malice intended) to the man from the Browne family making shady deals, and I loved the mention of a young teen with his head held high as he hoped to tell his own great story! You've set up an interesting mystery behind who the youth with the wooden wolf head symbol, what his relation to the dying king may have been, just how that king came to be in such a state, and if this is the ending they've reached in their own respective journies - one reaching the end of his life and another carrying on to the next story he may one day tell - I can't wait to see what their beginnings are!