what I hate the most is almost some of the dialogues have ?! question and exclamation mark on them even if it is not needed
Asbarta
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Yeah, I was still noob and a new to writing. So I made that mistake a lot, but don't worry I'm learning and improving with each chapter. After Chapter 30, you will find fewer of those mistakes. Thanks for your patience and support.