Review Detail of NowGoWithTheFlow in In Marvel I can Evolve Infinitely (X-Men/Marvel)

An Idea of making this fanfic was great but the way it was done ruin it for me. Here's the deal reincarnated into Marvel universe with bad translation an grammar. Now here's what I hate the most It's a Chinese style plagiarizing as many thing as possible in a Chinese way. For example wow MC did that/this an continue to praise for the next chapter just to go on to the next thing to praise. It's written in other's perspective most of the time an barely written in mc perspective.