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Hello Author, The grammar quality is good enough to read without issue but the problem is when people are in conversation no emotions conveyed at many or almost all chapters like for example if Eric speaks or his friends speaks they just say like amber said-----eric said------bro please write the emotion by which they are speaking like if they smiling while speaking or indifferently or coldly oe sadly like anything bro please just add the emotion just because of this i had to drop this 3 times then again continue after sometimes of there are any improvements.please author do improve it.Yours loyal reader.

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Ok. I will take your suggestion. I really think I did a lot already tbh. Btw I can do this from new chapters but I can't edit almost 700 published ones.