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Hi! A small honest review First of all the author is a newbie so there are grammar errors but dont fret! For he does fix them when someone points them out Characters especially the interactions between Sky and MC are funny There are a few plot holes here and there and the MC is kinda stone cold killer form the start which i see kinda strange but i dont really mind Next, story is pretty good there's a lot of potential specially with the Dracklers and the abilities Power scaling is kinda weird but since theres only 20 chapters out it will probably be fixed soon or later Well to conclude i think its a novel with potencial to be good just needs some polish here and there and more explanations of powers Thatd be all, later fellow daoist

My Demon Celestial System

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